WOWWOWWOW. Great poem. Ok, I'm curious, what was the exercise?

Awesome piece. I liked it a lot

i love this. Plain and simple. Stream of thought is the only way to write, it is the style I practice and the style I enjoy. This is will be the first I feel can belong on my favorites.

cool...its interesting how the subject changes in such a way that it seems random but it really isnt

Good.

I loved it! It was wonderful, such truth, It was astounding. The way you just let the words float onto the paper, like they were destined for it... Could you please tell me what kind of excersise it was that you wrote this with? I would love to know, e-mail me, _

Wow. That was pretty. What was the excercise? Always good to know a tip from a fellow writer, maybe will help with my writer's block on my stories. _