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.cupids.battlefield.
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseI have now read most of your work and can honestly say, i am impressed. You have done a brilliant job on most if not all of your work. Congratulations. Keep writing, you have a talent.
~CB
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DOORphrame
2007-05-01
ch 1,
abuseI love the format, it makes the poem seem taunting.
water lily nymph
2007-04-30
ch 1,
abuseooh this has a very cool ring to it. i like how you kept the formatting the same in the stanzas - it seems like it could be a perfect circle song. :)

tres tres cool.

TexasWatermelon
2007-04-30
ch 1,
abuseOh, this is very intense and angsty. But I like it. I like the format too. Fitting, I think. Nicely done, eagerly awaiting those others you mentioned.
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