Good. Some lines are clumsy, but the poem is very creative and I like the characterization of Mr. Mudley and his words. You havesome creative images, as in "Crossing the Styx tracks", "A utopia in an hourglass...A Painter, cursed to paint forever/
Even though all that remained was his hand", "His dead maid poured her the elixir of life.". It's a meeting/clash between too unique semi-supernatural characters. Nice.