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Keira_Osaki 2008-08-11 ch 8, anon.	abuseokay this is the first story i've read by you and i've got to say it- totally rocked! I've never read anything like this before! i really wished it was longer but whatever, it still was awesome :D i really hated how chapter 7 made me cry like a total idiot xDD you are amazing author and im totally gonna read your other stories! x3
Bleeding White Lily 2008-07-29 ch 8,	abuseJust so you know, this is a T rated fic, not K+. K+ Is for 9 year olds and under and this is obviously for teens, not children. Just thought you'd like to know that. Some people are and can report you just for that. I know someone who was and her story was really good too. D: Anyway, the epilogue. I still don't really like Case but oh well, you win some and lose some I guess. I'm looking forward to your longer stories though. I'm not really one for cliche's but I want to read all your stories. Starting with the one's that are completed. ^-^ I do like how she finally is getting over her sick obsession with a fictional character--even my obsession isn't that strong. . . for anything!--and it's good she's not so mental and didn't up her career. Though she has redeemed herself in a way though, I'm still not particularly fond of her character. But your writing is good. The grammer/spelling, the detail. So good job. Smooches. MUCH LOVE!
Bleeding White Lily 2008-07-29 ch 7,	abuseI love Dorian but hate Case. Heh, why are the girls in most stories always such idiots? Ha ha. I make them sometimes too but still, smart girls are always a nice read. >:) I can't believe she got so involved in a frick'n book. Dorian should ** slap her back to reality, there are exceptions and some girls deserve it. I do love that he's so faithful to his chickie! Cheaters should live their life alone. . . T.T Society would be much better without them.
Bleeding White Lily 2008-07-29 ch 3,	abuseOMG! Making someone forget about their wife and baby is SICK! Even if it is a made up dude that she created! I hope she gets her ** kicked by. . . someone!--sorry, just really hate it when girls turn on other girls for a frick'n boy. (I ish a feminist ha ha) She needs to find someone real and not taken by a fictional chickie. How can someone not like one of their own made up chickies? I love all my characters, even the villains.
Bleeding White Lily 2008-07-29 ch 2,	abuseIt's kind of funny how she feels so jealous over her own character from a book. Wow, she's an idiot for jeopardizingher her career like that. Ah ha! If some psycho like that did that to me I'd see nothing but white padded walls for him. Weird chapter. ha ha, interesting.
Bleeding White Lily 2008-07-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is short but I see that it gets real longer later. :D I'm excited to be reading your stories now. ;) I'll try and review as much as possible. I wish I could have big selling books! One day. . . I shall publish and come out LARGE! >:) Ha ha. Or grow large, whichever. I have some fan girls on this site! They're so cute! They add me to a bunch of stuff and give me comments of praise on myspace and everything. Fan girls are adorable. And yeah, I always thought that if a book gets published the author--who CREATED the people!--would be best to pick the actors for it. Ha ha, funny how she wants to have a guy like the one in her book. But then, she made up the guy. And when we make up guys don't we make up what we'd like to have in a dude? When it comes to the main character of the love story. . . I think I do. Otherwise I wouldn't like writing about him. I wish I could make Pierce come to life! That would be 'n SWEET! Though I wouldn't want a guy who was whipped, I'd want him to have his own friends-anyone who isn't a good friend can forget it!- interests--his own life. Because I hate it when clingy people are CONSTANTLY all over your from morning to dusk every day, all day. Ha ha, to each their own though. I have daydreams and fantasies about Ruki--the singer of GazettE--like that. Ha ha! and he's real too, but STILL out of my reach! Curses! And he blew all the said created sex gods out of the water in the sexual fantasies department, I must say. You can’t have a name like Dorian Quinn and not be good between the sheets, now can you? Ha ha! LOVED THAT! But I don't know. . . I think Lure could compete with him! XD I even had a dream about him! And he was a character from a book on fp! My favorite. . . because he's a bad ** demon who's morbid. >:) It's great. Ha ha, I wish I could say: I needed him and somehow, somehow, I was going to get him. About Ruki. Ha ha! Nice intro to the story. MUCH LOVE
Lady Knight 1512 2008-07-05 ch 8,	abuseSo! I've finally finished reading all your stories! YAY! So, fortunately for you, i send reviews for all of them. You may find them getting a little repetitive, because i can't think of one that i didn't love. BUT! I liked this story mostly for the concept. It's safe to say that all writers fall for their characters in one way or another. It's virtually impossible not to care about them. However, i can't say i've ever heard of a writer actually falling in love with one, so Casey's problem was an interesting one. I was intrigued, especially 'cause Dorian was so ... great. I've never tried to make any of my male characters my perfect guy before. Usually i put various traits or characteristics i admire into them. Overall, i would have liked this to be longer. You could have doen a lot more with it, but hey, i still loved it! Casey was cool, in a obsessive, slightly neurotic way. And of course, Dorian was perfect. LoL. Good job! ~LK1512~
Lovedward48 2008-06-28 ch 8, anon.	abuseWow! Really intense!! I can understand Casey! I've felt same way as well just not 'this' intense! I always feel like fictional characters were real and that makes it so hard to just let them go and move on! I bet you've felt the same way too or you wouldn't have been able to write this awesome story! You did a good job, 'author' ;)
rachely 2008-06-10 ch 8,	abuseWasn't at all what I expected. A big twist to what I normally read. Really good though. :)
Tor 2008-06-08 ch 3, anon.	abuseCreepy. I love your storylines. Unfortunately I'll have to leave reading this till another day. I've already spent so much of my work and sleep time reading your stuff the past two days. :)
Sarahj259 2008-05-30 ch 8,	abuse...I'm just going to put this out there and if you don't like it you can send it right back...YOU ARE FRIGGIN AMAZING!! I hope you realize this...
gulistanlik 2008-05-19 ch 7,	abuseWoah. That was really depressing. Oh my, that had to hurt a great deal, letting go. Ouch. I love how your ideas for stories! Just when I think I can predict what's going to happen in your stories, I'm wrong! =D Keep up the good work, dearest! gulistanlik
gulistanlik 2008-05-18 ch 4,	abuseLemme guess, Cassandra and the baby don't really exist anyway, right? Cos if they did, not only would Dorian appear but the places he knew would be changed to the way he knew and not how they really are in life. Must read on! gulistanlik
Jackache 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseOkay. Well, first of all, I have to say that you've got guts to write this story- and I mean it in a good way. There are a lot of people, especially writers, who loose themselves in their writing or in books. That's one of the reasons why I read and write myself. And I can relate to Casey... 'Boys in Books are so much Better.' I think I know how you felt when you wrote the chapter before the epilogue, when Casey has to let go of Dorian. That's why I'm saying you've got guts- and talent. The ending was bittersweet. I cracked a smile at the last part: Maybe it’s his Colin Farrell quality, who knows. :) Nice one. I love this. (in a way... I'm a sucker for happy endings, but I like this one.) But I do wish it was longer... maybe you could add another guy to at least comfort Casey... but that's just my opinion. =) All in all, it was still great. Adds to Faves
wilko4523 2008-04-29 ch 2,	abusehey love all your work! this is the only story i havn't read so far of yours and this is just a sgood as all your others lol prayed to every god-m did she pray to the wombles-i know for a fact that they grant everything you can pray for! lol ;) x

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