ooh, i wont even bother trying to tell why this was gorgeous. but it was. you have really unique style of writing, and i like it more with every piece i read. great write.

I like this line: I never asked you to stay, but I beg that you don't leave. Very apt. A new fave of mine.

I like. :]

i actually like this

i am not usually a rhyme person

but this is different, dark

I love the lines, "We don’t have much room to love,/More or less to breathe,". I also (L)(O)(V)(E) your pen-name.

"Common sense throws me down the stairs" - that's a great line. Awesome poem. It has a lot of emotion in it. Very nice. Keep up the good work!