nice. short to the point, yet deep. nice.

hmm. on the one hand, this left me wanting a little more in terms of content, but on the other it leaves me with the very same question you ask yourself here as well as a deep pondering on the subject. well done. just wish it could have been just a few lines longer.

contrasting emotions... like doubts...

nice...

good. makes you think again. but i like the umm. watchamacallit. oh. writers block one better. i think you do too reading what you wrote on the bottom. well, trust me, i know how hard it is to write poems and that is why i don't write them. :)

o- pretty- short and sweet and too the point- i like it