i love the rhythm in this. the words are marvelous too. it's something about it that's addictive.

'a one-two kind of stutter'. i have no idea why i've latched onto that phrase, or what that kind of stutter sounds like, but i love it.

Realistic and more in depth. I like this alot.

I really like this poem, like all your other ones it's so real and. . . Just great.
Faith

i-i don't know what to say.
you blow me away everytime.
this is overwhelming in all the right ways that'll keep you up at night.