Reviews for Lost in the Wilderness

Reviews For: Lost in the Wilderness

Decoris Verbum 2008-11-17 . chapter 1

Haha, this was funny, but one thing to keep in mind is to not make your dialogue so forced. I know you're trying to get a point across, but just put yourself in the situation and try to act natural. Overall, nice job!

Happy writing,
-DV-

l3g3nd 2008-04-29 . chapter 1

Haha cute and hilarious.

Happy writing ^^

Seraphim Traveler 2007-06-30 . chapter 1

I could actually understand that. The situation is actually hilarious.

your name 2007-05-01 . chapter 1

^^ THAT WAS FUNNY!

FreewayofFlight 2007-05-01 . chapter 1

Wow, that's pretty funny!

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