Beautifully written, as always. This piece is intense and the imagery is so powerful! After I read this, all I could think was "Wow!"

Amazing job!

I love the imagery. Nice (as always).

Rowan.

Wow, really powerful images, Ashelin. Great work. I especially loved the last stanza.

This is cool, it's very descriptive so I can get a good picture in my head of it all.