i reaaaaaaaaaly like this story. well written, 'action packed' in short time span. good premise, excellent twist, kinda lik the movie i never saw. it was poignant and i was not expecting that. it make ya wanna grab life by the proverbial balls and just tell her already : D

This was very well written. I wanted to cry at the end. Thanks for sharing

Awh, I can't believe you made me cry again.

As usual I can fault nothing. This story is absolutely amazing.

This is AMAZING.