*Glares at you for the ending* I loved it honestly. A few typo's here and there but it was wonderful...except the ending...*Glares again* Anyways, I'm not sure if you rewrote/published it yet. I'll look and see.

lord between his son and ben? blimey
this is just getting twistier and then even more twisty!
seriously
its kinda weird
thats y i luv it tho!
=P

wow this is a really cool story
who is she gonna end up wiv tho?
seriously she's lusting after 3 guys!
lols
gotta read on!

I liked everything but the ending; that part sucked...But it was well written.

Fantastic, fantastic ending to the story. Thanks so much for writing this, and I hope to see more from you in the future :)

~Carm~

I loved your story. I loved the whole father and son traitor thing. I wanted her with both of them! But happy and when they weren't trying to kill her...

So well done!

What? Oh, man. That was tough, but brilliantly dramatic!

Oh what the heck kind of ending is that! Is she dead or is she dying? Nice job, but dang is all I have to say.

I really did enjoy the story, not really happy with the way it ended and I hope there is a sequel.

OMFG!! that was a huge twist! even for a short chapter the ending was amazinng! i love the story and you ended it perfectly. good job! lovess youu!

amazing ending! it was awesome and it gives an insight who she might pick. haha. aethe is amazing. and gorgeous! nice story sadie!

I loved it! Aether is so awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter, although I know that it is time for it to be over I'm still sad to see it done.

An amazing story! Can't get enough it! Sad to hear that it is ending soon.

awee this was such a cute chapter! is she gunna marry aether? hm? ah i cant wait to see wat happens! update soon!

haha aw!
i hope she makes up with ben.

update soon! ur good!
:D