Very thought provoking haiku. Very original, it challenges the reader to look at their lives and where they belong. Wonderful haiku, going on my favorites.

Peace, Daze

nice haiku, with beautiful imagery.

great point and i loved how u sent the message across.

good job.

hm... i fit in the spaces of nothingness of life's oucasted realms? lol...

nice...

You can try to imagine the world in the poem. This is a great haiku. Great job.

Gee, I've been wondering about that myself... I really have no idea.

Great haiku.

I imagined painting pictures of humanity on my eyelids. Crazy but beautiful imagery here. Last line was perfect. Great job.