This is amazing! It bounces along very nicely, never sounds cheesy, and really does great justice to dragon-kind. There was one spot were your wording made me stumble (She was the Dragon of Self and of Spite,) and there I would take out the 'of' in 'of spite', but it's up to you. Great work!

This is fantastic. I love dragons and they way you described them all was so kool.