I love this, it very much shows how you feel, and it's very beautiful. The imagery of the "glass child" breaking is very powerful. Nice work.

Well, that's nice. It's a sad poem but it's well done.

Aw so sensitive and descriptive...that's one of the most purest of poems I have ever read. Also I can relate to it, I love relating to poems. I realize I'm only twelve and my opinion may not mean much to you at all (although I am unaware of your age), but I'd like to write like that one day...
Hehehe that sounds like a song or something...maybe I should write a poem about wanting to be a writer...geez that would be funny! XD

This was a truly heartfelt poem. It was really powerful. I hope your friend realizes just how much you care for him. It was a beautiful piece.