The sole sound coming from a couple of restless crickets are soon drowned out and swallowed up by this black abyss called ‘night’.

(very cool comparaison)

I find the description very beautiful.

That was a very cool chapter! I liked how Taro showed up in the field, then Seth's house right after. Awesome!

I wasn't really expecting the whole Japanese theme kind of thing to come in, but I decided for once to be open-minded and read it anyway. After all you are doing a great job. :] Excellent chapter!

I definitely need to see more of this!

Ahh, this is AWESOME. :] Definitely worth continuing.