This is freakin amazing!
NeverNever Land is SO a real place! I want to go, too!

I can't believe it. How'd you find out I've always wanted to find Neverland?!
Great story.. it would enthrall children forever.

*claps* Glad you put this up so I could read it, cause you just gave me insperation, thanks *glomp*
Love the content, and you better get working on the full version *waves a stick at you*

Kind of a strange concept, but it works. The only thing I'm a bit iffy on is the fact that everyone randomly has psychic powers. If it's a school for kids with disabilities, that's something different, something people already know. State the fact that its a 'psychic' disability or something, otherwise it sounds sudden and out of context. In other words, unbelievable. You want to make the story believable in context, and thus, you need to explain your idea more. We, the readers, don't know what's going on inside your head. You need to tell us exactly.

I say this because I've had trouble with it in the past. I knew what I was trying to say, and to me it made complete sense. However, that was only because I filled in the holes by myself. I gave it to other people to read and there was crutial information missing, or things that didn't make sense to them. So, give this to whoever you can and ask them what does and doesn't work. It'll improve it immesurably.

Oh, and to end with a positive note, you have excellent grammar usage! :)

-Mad