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Euphorialie 2008-07-26 ch 12,	abuseWoah, she's an angel. Didn't expect that one. Though I guess she's sort of a diluted angel since some of her ancestors must be human. Right? Anyway, I liked this bit of information and happy birthday!
GG 2008-07-26 ch 4, anon.	abuseXD If u relate demons and chocolate in this story again, I'm going to die of Choking/laughter. I really loved chap. 4, so thanks. (The blood drinking, I can handle, but not the chocolate! lol)
sousie 2008-07-26 ch 12,	abuseupdate soon
InsaneRomantic15 2008-07-26 ch 2,	abuseI'm confused. The first chapter makes it seem like she's in college. In this chapter she's suddenly in high school...
FiveToCharm 2008-07-15 ch 11,	abuseWel, this is one of the more interesting things I've read in a while :) I like how you twist a bit of humour into your writing, even if the situation isn't quite humourous. And I love the characters, and how multifaceted they are :). They make me happy. I'll be waiting for the next chapter of this (even though it's already been four months since the last update :\|), and I hope things start to pick up again. :D
FiveToCharm 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, interesting stuff =)
Carmel March 2008-03-22 ch 11,	abuseThis story makes me smile. Keep up the amazingness :) ~Carm~
Liviania 2008-03-21 ch 11,	abuseSounds like a very interesting library. And I love Bel and Kali's relationship. Such wonderful sniping. Livi
Sophelia 2008-03-18 ch 11,	abuseinteresting chapter - plenty of screaming and a new mysterious weapon =] Bel's starting to grow on me, interestingly. It's nice to see that he actually does care about Kali. the heated argument between them was probably the highlight of this chapter - liked the tension in the dialogue. i don't know if it was intentional, but kali seemed rather screechy and selfish during the fight. just one suggestion: if you plan on editing this chapter, there's one point where Bel has a mood swing from angry to exhausted that seems a little abrupt. i also really liked the description of the knife - so beautiful yet deadly at the same time. maybe it's because i haven't read the beginning of For Sale for awhile, but i'm starting to forget what Devon and Aeriel are like, appearance and personality-wise. i guess i should go back and reread sometime =]
honey and cocoa i scream 2008-03-18 ch 6,	abuseswet! nice story...intresting this is what i got of wikipedia:confusing... "In Norse mythology, Yggdrasil (Old Norse Yggdrasill, IPA: [ˈyɡˌdrasilː]; the extra -l is a nominative case marker) is the World Tree, a great ash tree located at the center of the universe and joining the nine worlds of Norse cosmology. The trunk of the tree may be thought of as forming a vertical axis around which these worlds are situated, with Ásgard, realm of the gods, at the top and the Hel, located in Niflheim, at the bottom. Midgard, the world of mortals, is located in the middle and surrounded by Jötunheim, land of giants, both of which are separated by the ocean. Yggdrasil is also sometimes known as Mimameid or Laerad."
Alethia Hartwood 2008-03-18 ch 11,	abuseThankyou :) Alethia xxs
Euphorialie 2008-03-18 ch 11,	abuseYay, another chapter! You have no idea how excited I was when I got an alert for this. Right, so the chapter. First off, it was AMAZING, and I definitely enjoyed the return of Bel even though he's still being an idiot. I can totally understand where Kali's coming from since he just stole her away to freakin HELL and he's not even being nice about it. And I'm very intrigued about how Kali's relationship with Devon is developing. Totally didn't see it coming that he would be the one to comfort her and the surprise is definitely welcome. I foresee some sort of jealousy from Bel as he realizes how close Kali and Devon are...possibly. And the knife, that seems important too, along with Bel's little slip-up about his father's 'children' instead of 'child'. So I'm definitely wanting more in order to find out what else is going on. So great job. Plus, even though this wasn't edited I didn't catch anything, so another wonderful job there too. Woot!
Merry wanderer of the night 2008-03-14 ch 6,	abuseI love this story! Is Ariel the same Ariel from the tempest? (Puck?)I'm only on chapter 6, so if thats revealed later, beg pardon. Anyway, excellent!
Alethia Hartwood 2008-03-08 ch 10,	abuseI love this story... please tell me it is't abandoned? T_T You're now the first one on my 'faves' list, btw XD Alethia xxs
sousie 2008-02-17 ch 10,	abuseawsome update soon

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