I've read this before, but I didn't review it. *blushes* It's a very interesting concept, but quite heartbreaking. You did a fabulous job writing it, as usual.

although the end seemed sort of...rushed, i still loved it, especially the first half. keep it up!

WOW! Fig, that was AMAZING! I don't think the end sounded rushed. You did a great job with this!

It's so sad that so many people don't really care anymore when things like this happen. Now people just say, "It happens all the time, we should just get used to it." You know, that's just really sad.

It's nice when I see that there are people out there(like you) who still do care! Great, great, great, great job on this! I'm very impressed!

Sorry to say, but it's slightly flat and emotionless. It definitely sent shivers down my spine, but there's no sense of devastation in the aftermath. Also, the narrator being the shooter's best friend is a good twist, but the shooters are generally loners. Well, I hope I don't sound too harsh, and I reckon it's cool that you've chosen to write about such a controversial topic at such a time - that's brave. Good on ya! ;)