Aw this is very sad. It was good though. I liked these lines, "What struggle we make to live
How good a brand new day tastes
The welcome of soft beds"
Good job

Wow. Heartbreaking, truly, Bread. It's just so oddly poignant and depressing all at once. Like, I'm going to make you cry and slam a life lesson on you while you're having an emotional breakdown. And then you do.

Quite, quite inspiring (more in a literary sense than anything else) and decidedly beautiful.

Felicia.

Strong sense of sadness in this. Overpowering. Very strong poem; very strong emotion.

Wolfie