How sad is this story :(. I'm really intrigued, and will definitely keep reading!

u are very gud also pls add pwn3d to ur c2 nice story by reachforit

um, ok way shorter then normal - and somehow i just notieced that the main character was chinese - DOY!

i'm half chinese!

:P

that took me a while

:P

yeah.

OMG the new sixth graders ARE FREAKING SHORT

last year of middle school, CANT WAIT TO FUCKING ESCAPE!

UPDATE *SOON*

not in half a year, *SOON*

it may not have come across to you that some of us are impacient (and as slacky of authors as u are)

so update *soon*

ahh, i think lou is a girl...


anyways, update BITCH BECAUSE U NEED MORE...

i dont think u have a complete story do you?

idc tho

i do kinda


UPDATE

~your muse(?)
rales

after that comment about 70 year old guys, i was about to ask you if you were 70...

lolz

anyways, i like this story (no i said that alreaddy)

so far its about 7.5/10

ha, i guess im stoping low again...oh well

i like this story
its simple and honest

here are some reasons why i like it
- my moms first name was jenny (jenniffer, but she cahnged it)
- im in 7th grade (are u in it 2 cause u write about it a lot)
- i look up to ppl like jesus (but seriously, JESUS!)
- and another reason 1 4got

anywho, I shal read on

wow, this is kinda interesting...


seeing as im half asian

and there is this kid i kno named spencer (but i like him)

yeah...

Lovely story. Planning on updating any time soon? Eagerly awaiting.

Loved this chapter. Update soon!

I could relate to this chapter really well because I'm bi, and I've just started to be open about it. I wish that I could be as mature as Lou when it comes to coming out.

Ha, "Jesus sounds Buddhist". Love it. "It" as in the story. Not Lou.
I really wish we'd know what gender Lou is, but I'm assuming he's male... Now I'm second-guessing myself... Dang.

Wow. It would really suck having the name Jesus.
Jesus Lam? Is that a pun of some kind? Jesus is often referred to as the Lamb of God.
Ooh, family conflict is delicious.

This is sad. I remember the desolate loneliness of third to sixth grade. I can relate.

"release your hate, Samson."

Samson? But the chapter title is Samuel? Eh? *confused*

"but yeah, he told me, ‘Samuel, you need to release your hate,"
No, he didn't, he said "Samson" O.o

Anyhow, I still like it. And aww, Sam invited Lou over! :D I wonder what Lou is... Hmm.. Maybe it will be revealed later? And hey, aren't they supposed to have gym? Shouldn't Lou choose locker rooms then? THEN we can all find out! :D

Ah yes, the story: Nice chapter, and I like this other weird strange and semi-frightening side of Spencer (hah, momma's boy ^^)

Keep it up and don't lose yourself amongst your studies, ya hear? :P

- Frac

Spencer really is a loser. He should die. :-P

This was a good chapter. Update soon!

Great! I really liked this chapter! Spencer reminds me of people I know, not particularly pleasant is he? Keep up the good work! This story is fantastic!