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| chasingcars101 2008-03-10 ch 16,  | abuseI'm loving the AI already. Always good to have a female one as well. |
| chasingcars101 2008-03-07 ch 15, | abuseWow, thanks for updating so fast. Loved the description of the ship. |
| chasingcars101 2008-03-05 ch 14, | abuseNice twist at the end of the chapter. Thanks for updating, the plot is definately thickening! :P |
| chasingcars101 2008-01-12 ch 13, | abuse-grin- well you should already now what I'm gonna say - great chapter, except for the minor and when I say minor I mean really tiny, spelling and grammer errors. But as usual your writing is met with open arms. |
| chasingcars101 2008-01-10 ch 12, | abuse*giggles with glee* Oh, I think the entire of state of Queensland heard me when I saw an alert for this story in my inbox. YAY! Are Jared and Amelia going to get together? Please write more soon! |
| chasingcars101 2008-01-09 ch 11, | abuse-jumps up and down- YAY!! Two chapters straight after one another! Very nice descriptive words, especially in the Cafe. Please don't stop here! |
| chasingcars101 2007-08-20 ch 9, | abuseNice going, explaining the plot and everything. I liked how you had the Amelia explain how the drug was actually a poison, great job. |
| chasingcars101 2007-07-14 ch 7, | abuseAnother great chapter and thanks for mentioning me at the end. As well, I noticed this and thought that you might want to know... "Hey, I'm down her. I gopt hit on the leg, so I can't move." she called out. Just thought I might inform bout those mistakes, other than that it was brilliant! |
| chasingcars101 2007-07-08 ch 6, | abusenice chapter, loved the mysterious girl parts. But whats new. |
| chasingcars101 2007-06-29 ch 5, | abuseVery nice. I really enjoyed the mysterious girl's part and how you barely reveal any clues as to her identity. |
| Andrea 2007-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abusehey nate, I like it so far it is good and i think that you should difanitly make the chapters longer. also you are a good and amazing writer i wish if i could sit down and write like that mabey some day i will beable to. keep up the good work and keep working on your story. |
| chasingcars101 2007-06-17 ch 4, | abuseVery nice, I really loved he way you described the girl at the beginning, thanks for updating! |
| chasingcars101 2007-05-29 ch 3, | abuseI loved the chapter ending! It was a really good! I really like the way you write your stories! |
| chasingcars101 2007-05-05 ch 2, | abuseThat was another wonderful chapter! Maybe there is no disease, its just a front so the pilots will do illegal missions, and if they get caught, people will just blame the pilot. Is that good? |
| chasingcars101 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseOMG, please write more! I cant wait to see what the test is for! |