i love the story.. its super good.. hehe..

aw.. sweet. adorable. i love it.:D

Cute. But not very productive. Perhaps you should delve more into the narrative? And the changing of tenses give me a headache.

Nice piece, very accurate reflection of love to a 13 year old

That was an awesome story!! I loved the entire concept, and it was totally cute. Great job!

I like it, yup, nicely done indeed. Unfortunately, I kind of relate. I definitely agree on regret hurting worse than heartache. Regrets suck.

nice.

nice.

Wow, very deep.

Summed up beautifully in this short piece. Brilliant work Hannahdoll!

knowing how you freak out, I feel sorry for the guy! i really like this piece though, reminds me of the thing you got in chicken soup

Are you over the guy? Now, I mean.

Aww..

This oneshot was amazing. You had me hooked.
And by the way, your summary for Songbird (or how it was called before right?) caught my attention and I was like "I read this before!" And ya know, I was freakin out for a sec cause I thought it was copied but then yea, you're dustmitebunny so Woo Hoo. hahahaha. Anyways, I've always loved your stories. I think you're an awesome writter. I immensily enjoy being stuck in what your words create. And the slight jealously that you're a better writter then me is there ;) but the admiration overcomes it. :P

P.S. Love scares me shitless too. So much I hurt the guy I sorta-loved by completly ignoring him. :( He moved on and my best friend likes him. So I'm stuck giving her advice about how to get with him. :( hahahaha. Shit.Oh well.

I heart this piece