I really liked the way you put TICK in there. I have done adderral and ritilin, and other forms of things that make you speedy, lol, and the way i interpret it is how fast you think. You may not be moving a lot, you may be sitting on a couch, but it's like being in a racecar, watching things zip by you in a blurred line. How your thoughts are so constant, never stopping... i was thinking about a second going by (TICK), and all those thoughts crammed in in a second. Time is of no consequence when you're on that shit. A second feels like an hour, feels like a second, and so on. I'm not sure that's what you intended, but I really liked that. It's different. It really spiced it up a notch. BAM!

you sure this isnt based off of you? jk. lol.