Hey nice poem...lol the table talk of spelling was great. He was lying when he said broccoli has a k...duh. What can you say, it's Mike...But yeah just thought I'd review...
Cya tommorrow

Broccoli. Caffeine. And the poem is pretty funny, though the rhymes and rhythm are WAY too forced. The idea's good, but I think the presentation could be better. I totally agree with you, though. I'm always so sad that books have to END.

It was a cute poem, but the rhyming seemed a bit forced and the last line just kind of hung there. There was so much space between the connection it had with the first line that you kind of forget it was even connected at all. I think a bit of brushing up would make it a really nice poem. Good job. C=

Aww... that was sad. Lol, I got a kick out of the 'eat some pie' line. xD That reminds me of my friend... but the poem was awesome. You got xylophone right but you spell broccoli and caffeine like how I just did. xD Nice job Kristin. :3