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| she smolders 2007-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseI don't think most of us will be ready to swim when the time comes. This poem could stand for so many different emotions and right now it makes me think of defeat. The character you portray intrigues me. Take care. |
| R. Louise 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this poem. The fairy-tale-like quality is something I can really appreciate. |
| Killer Syntax 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseNice imagery! The flow is just fine, in my opinion. Nice job! |