"Once upon a time a little girl

Played with poetry and fell into

A gray casket that played piano

Song as the Raven continued

To sing death into her veins but

She loved this loveless way to live

Until a kiss breathed unwanted life

Into her lungs so she could die again

Love stories always perish first"

That entire end is ravishing. Good work!

Great last line.

Sorry it's taken me forever to review your things. This weeks has been...busy. Let's just leave it at that.

Anyways, great poem (as always!).

Rowan.

Some love story last. Great poem.

SirScott

I love the way you word things.

It seems like you have a unique way of writing poems, which is a good thing.

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