It's really good, but so sad at the same time.

Yeah, you spelled porcelain wrong but it was good nonetheless. =]

OMG thats so sad. Very good and strong. I like it.

~Mandy

It's "porcelain", doll. ;) Hell, I didn't know until I looked it up.

I love:

"if you don't think it's a disease
why do you pay for her drugs?"

Because it is clever and witty and a perfect ending. Just, gorgeous.

Also, the whole mood of the piece is really affected by your word use and through the tension built through the each scene you created. I love it.

- Noelle