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| 'Gone Bye-Bye' 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseHey, Stewey! Once more, you've done it again! We seem to think alike too much! :) As always, nice grammar, good use of spelling, awesome curse words (thise are always good), and a complete disregard for what other people think. :) This is definitely a favorite! |
| R-Reynard 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abusethis is really good, haha in a way it kinda reminds me of me |
| Avice 2007-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was incredible, i had to read that a few times, that is deep shit. Rock the fuck on. Avice |
| RedWheeler 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseHey, glad to see that you managed to finish the song! I personally really loved it, probably because I'm a fan of the two asformentioned (I'm pretty sure that's one word) songs in your summary. I do have one thing to say though, you have a lot of "your" confusions within the song. Quite a handfull of them are supposed to be "you're" instead of the alternative. But nonetheless, my favourite segment was: "Don't believe you can provoke me! And drive me into tears! Don't trust in things that you believe, Because I'll exceed your fears!" Although I really liked the whole song, and I thought it was a tad bit longer than your other pieces, which is always grand. Another great job! |