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| Moonpig123 2008-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this. It's so over-the-top and strange in its violence and premise that I couldn't pull my eyes away from the screen! Nice sly commentary on the need to document everything, as well... (I presume this was intended?!) Good work-I could see someone like Quentin Tarantino directing a film version of this, and that is no bad thing at all. Keep it up. |
| Aisling Grey 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis story is truly flawless. Wonderful and sad. Usually when I read a story on this site that I believe to be fantastic, it turns out that it is not. There's always grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes. Or they leave words out that should be in the sentence. Or their spelling is just awful and gives me a headache. And their use of tenses, adverbs, and adjectives are laughable. But your tale is... perfect. I find no such problems with this. You my friend should have this published. It is definitely worth the read. |