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| Carmel March 2007-07-02 ch 7,  | abuseVery neat point of views here. I like the insight on Hyde's life. Great chapter, and I'm now off to go read your other update :) ~carm~ |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-07-01 ch 7, | abuseOh, this is going to be good. I like how you threw in some of Hyde's POV. All you need now is to throw in some of Boris's POV. I think that would be great. Boris seems like a dunderhead though. I like Hyde's revenge by icing the lake. Nice. Good chapter. I'd like to also add that I'm very proud of you to finish two chapters in one day! I applaud you. I hope you get moving on these stories. I would love to read more. This story seems funny. |
| Carmel March 2007-05-28 ch 6, | abuseFantastic story so far! I absolutely adore the characters. They're very real, very likable. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more! ~carm~ |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-21 ch 6, | abuseThat was a painfully short chapter but it was good. Is that what really happened? I'd have to say that Hyde's story seemed rather simple. Windigos wouldn't be so simple and he said that he didn't work well with fire. Hmm...I wonder what it is. Update soon |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-13 ch 5, | abuseHeh. I can just imagine Hyde standing in a fire. He would be more protected from that Windigo than Kellis and Boris. She'll get a concussion(sp?) now that she passed out. It was a good chapter. Why are Boris and Hyde at an understanding? Or is that just because of their situation? I guess I'll find out. I'm not the greatest speller. I have to use spell check all of the time. So sorry if I spelled anything wrong. ((PSST: Hyde is my favorite character so far)) |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-07 ch 4, | abuseWindigos AND Werewolves. Man, that's some woods right there. I would never enter it. Are they going to make it? |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-06 ch 3, | abuseLol, Boris kept the dog! That's funny. And he has a sword. That's frightening. And I see that Hyde had good intentions toward her singing. I thought he was going to use her for something evil. Hey - it could happen. Update soon! |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-06 ch 2, | abuseOh, so that's what's with the 'Merrow'. I get it. Ha! Boris got his with a dog. That's something you don't read everyday. Boris must be one hell of a climber if he could climb that. Hmm..Hyde is mysterious. What does he want her to sing for him? |
| Disenchanted Words 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseLol, the Hero Cycle. I get it. We had to do a project on the hero cycle in class once. Back when I was a junior. What's with the 'Merrow'? |