Amusing poem. :D

~Twilight Starr~

I love Dasani water too. When it comes to flavored water, though, I get sick. I'm allergic to the Slenda that they put in flavored water. This is good though.

so cute. bottled water is pretty expensive, and i've never understood why they make raspberry flavored water. it's kind of weird.

krystelvampire

Haha. That's awesome! Long live Dasani water! Hilarious and now I'm thirsty for some Dasani. Eh, I'm too lazy to get some. Random but funny. Most excellent.

-TTH

Correction: "Your such good water" That should be "You're", unless you say something about "your such good water", like "...makes my day", but then the "such good" sounds too long, repetitive, and awkward. So stick with "You're".

Content: It's funny. I personally hate Dasani water, so I can't relate to this, but the lines made me smile. Simple, but amusing.

That was pretty good and cute.

~SirScott