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| Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2007-11-15 ch 1,  | abuseVery good! A wonderful piece of perception about the suspended world outside the screen. Pan's Labyrinth by any chance? Very visual. I found it easy to place myself behind the protagonist's eyes. |
| Trinity Dragon 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI went on a trip once, with my highschool choir. And during that trip, we had to oportunity to stop by an old high school to listen to their choir. The auditorium we were in was actually a converted theatre, complete with the chandeliers and balconies and the guilded stage. Even the seats were silk covered. This just so vividly reminded me of that place, and the fading sounds of vocals. I give you a 4/5 over all, because while this was excellent, nothing is ever perfect. One last thing, too, I can picture an old man like that. My next door neighbor... Trinity Dragon (TD) |