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Tawny Owl 2008-06-14 . chapter 1
That was really creepy. I liked the fact that you diddn't describe her apperanc straight away, but left it towards the end. The fact that she doesn't have a voice makes it more surreal as well. It would have been nice to know more about why she was following though.
Kathlien 2008-03-11 . chapter 1
creepy, stalker!

the girl of depression
the girl of misery

tears of blood
tears of sorrow

misery love me
everyone hates me

reason
I'm me

hehehe. hoped you get inspired by this.
Creepy Doll 2007-10-18 . chapter 1
Very descriptive.

I like it.
GreyStar Dreams 2007-05-30 . chapter 1
Umm.. so do you REALLY see someone like that following you? That is scary. In other news, this is a marvellous little tale. I can picture things perfectly and this girl that nobody sees could be pictured and known in so many ways.

Some can say we know her, but do we really know someone who follows and watches the moves of another? We know her by many names and by many faces and by many other identities. But do we know her? Do we see her? Do we know it is her when we see her?

My little riddle... ^_^

This is great and i hope you have more wher these came from!!
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