Curious... I too wonder who that man was...
Quite spooky. Very good word choice. You had me on the edge of my chair.
You reminded me of my house, since my house is pretty old, so it creaks a lot.

Wow; THAT sounds like an experience! Whenever the power goes out here, we usually play charades or something... XD

But very good story! I was locked on the words, anticipating, and now I'm curious about that guy as well! >.<

Kind of strange about the house... in that my house also creakes, usally in doorways, and I also have a beaded curtians leading into my room, most always tied up on either side.
Well, certianly adds to the quality. ^-^

Looking forward to reading more of your writings, as always!

Ja~