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| elephant121 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThis story was great. It's so much different than all of your other writing! It just seemed to be a different style. I liked it a lot though! It could work as a one-shot or a story...I hope its not just a one shot! It was so good; you need to continue! Take care :-) -elephant121 (the pen name that has absolutely nothing to do with me...) |
| Ciao.Bella.Soldato. 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseAw... how sweet! This is just the kind of story that makes every girl pout and think "I wish a cute and compassionate guy would comfort me when I'm feeling down!" Keep up the good work! -Bella |
| Chaolioe 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked it a lot, and I really hope you do elaborate and go through with your plan. Yeah.. I'm a bit at a lack of words today, but know I liked it. |