 SamiWrites 2009-04-28 . chapter 5This is a really good read! I'm usually not into the 'twincest' but this is pretty interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Cittywolf 2008-10-04 . chapter 5YAY! New chapter. I like it alot. Keep updating.
Nice background story! It's the things like that that make a good story. Making your characters real is a sure fire way to bring in an audience. |
 Akki D. 2008-09-28 . chapter 5This seriously rocks, and I definatly wanna see more, please! Don't make me beg...8D I find Nathan to be absolutely adorable too, so keep it up~ |
 Solar Eclipse-2020 2008-09-01 . chapter 2Good plot and few spelling and grammar mistakes (so far). I like this :) :) I will the rest soon...
*adds to favorites* |
 CherryLover 2008-09-01 . chapter 5Thanks so much for the update! I really enjoed reading this chapter! Everything was so well written and I couldn't stop reading..lol. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more. 8D |
 JtheChosen1 2008-08-31 . chapter 5excellent work! |
 emmatheemmu 2008-08-30 . chapter 5Well, he only said "in the south" once this chapter. I'm glad you're restraining yourself~
Nice chapter~ I feel so bad for Uncle John! Q 3 Q
In the south! |
 Roman C Lee 2008-08-30 . chapter 5Yay!~ You updated ^-^ Great chapter; I really enjoyed reading it! Update soon! |
 uniqueindividual 2008-08-29 . chapter 5It's a good thing you updated! Please do it again! and props to your beta, Hurt me. |
 Roman C Lee 2008-07-30 . chapter 4WOOT! I love this story! You did a very good job, and withut a beta too! *wolf whisteles (if only I knew how)* Great job! I added this story to my C2 (community) for incest stories, so hopefully people will find it there and read it as well! Update soon! |
 Cittywolf 2008-04-02 . chapter 4nice |
 Mizu-Miha 2008-03-12 . chapter 1OMG I LOVE YOU! Please update! THis is awesome! |
 Melissa Norvell 2008-03-09 . chapter 4I'mtoo bogged down with projects to beta read. I can barely edit my own works. Sorry, I wish I could help you but I am simply too busy.
You do have a wonderful story that I hope you continue. Your emotional impact with the relationship is a wonderful thing. I like a story that can truly touch you. |
 HurtMe 2008-03-08 . chapter 4I want to begin by applauding you for writing a story about incest. It's a very touchy subject in today's society, and I think your willingness to write about it shows your strength as a writer. Also, I like that you emphasized that they're relationship is very emotional, and not just sexual. I think that's important in all gay relationships, not just incestuous ones. You convey emotion very well in this story. When Keane is lamenting not being able to tell his friend about his relationship with his brother, his pain is almost tangible. Great job. |
 uniqueindividual 2008-03-08 . chapter 4I have one thing to say... AW, soo cute! |