THE STORY! i loved it - as i already told you. it's sad and the guy is a bastard, but i still love every word of it. fanks! i love you!

wow, i haven't done this in FOREVER! how have things been val? good to see you haven't stopped writing. i liked this. i truly did, it's sad. can't wait for chapter 2.

Peace, Love, & Alphabet Soup

Michelle .

Nice, Val. I'm a little confused, though. It moved fast for so much information, as a short story should be, of course. He was mean...I didnt like him. Im glad youre writing D

Truly yours, dear.

I liked it. I thought the plot was was really good and even though it just was one chapter you developed it very well.