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| The Twitch 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThis doesn't just have to be about England. Hell, it's not much different where I live in Canada. Went from second place on the UN list of best countries to live in to seventh place in approximately a decade, and still going down. But heck, what does one do? Anyway, I liked the rhyme scheme even though it was a little choppy. Actually I think that's WHY I like it; the patterns fits the subject. The entire poem seems very honest. |
| J.J.M. Fisher 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis poem aptly describes the United States and probably many other nations as well. It is truly sad the state we are living in these days. |
| RavenChick07 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseGood job |