This is very descriptive. Very pretty. I don't get what point you made by using the parentheses though.

Today I have found something that I can relate to in your poems. This is just gorgeous.

very effective how you put some of the 'like's & 'and's in brackets, it works well. powerful last line as well. ~Bex

A quick contrast for what happened. But very nice. Great work!

Kristie Marie

I love the way that you wrote this. Funny how someone can make you seem like someone different and then they break you when they are gone. How they can become so important that they define us.

Keep it up.

love.

i kinda feel lighted reading this. tho', sorry i'm lame, but i still don't understand why you wish you could be the angel you used to be? it's as if you stopped being the angel you wrote?