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| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-12-10 ch 2,  | abuseAnother excellent chapter - the lines are a bit annoying though. I would suggest you try another way of displaying the stanzas. still, a great write. |
| FreyaRain 2007-06-14 ch 2, | abuseSo far you've stayed true to the story, this is really good(I can't write long poems), keep it up. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseVery impressive job! My only problem lies with the formatting of this poem. Instead of having solid stanzas, you put the lines, which are very distracting. I know why you did that (I used to), but I suggest exchanging this "chapter" with one that has the stanzas properly. Just erase between the lines in the stanzas, but between stanzas leave the space. Everything works out and is much clearer and less distracting than lines. The writing was entirely enjoyable and it's done wonderfully. |
| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuselove it, well done -the edge |
| RavenChick07 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abusecan we say this sounds very professional? And I can't spell, anyways, GREAT job on this, keep going, I want to read more of your works |