I like this one better. But I am not a fan of poetry. It's not how my mind works.

Wow! I like this one!

I caould never write a poem about writing, it's such a profound unexplainable feeling for me.

I feel safe for an eternity/Then I was brought back to reality.

Those lines really captured the way I feel when I write. This was a beautifully written poem. fav.


Surreal

First of, the title shocked me. Knowing you, you wouldn't steal.
It's good. It's really good. I think I prefer you as an optimist, but don't stop writing the grim stuff. My dear, you're getting better. Imagery, transition, and beginning and ending. Congrats! :D