Wow thats so. Powerful in a way.
Im really glad I read that

I really enjoyed this, its really detailed and nice.
reminds me of my lame ex.

That was beautiful. It was so close to choking me up. The word choice was wonderful and the way you describe things was so...life-like. Amazing story...really wonderful. Congratulations.

This is exaclty what really happens ... I think you portrayed the characters really well, from Emmy wanting to protect Grant and his 'I love you's. There are way too many people out there suffering like this and they don't even know it. Really good story. :)

A very good story indeed! I really like how well you were able to portray Emmy's character--it was very well written, in a sense that even in a short story, we are able to tell that she has a caring nature, and feels drawn to those who need help. It was very sad, and very wonderful. Great job.

Oh my GOD! This was absolutely beautiful, got me nearly to tears. They all seemed so real, and Em so innocent... Really, really good story.

The only thing I would change is that you need a divider of some kind between Em's flashback, and the shift to present when Grant says "What are you thinking about, Em?". But that and a few punctuation mistakes don't detract from this being one of the best things I've seen on FPress so far. Kudos.