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| daisy dreams. 2007-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseomg! this is so beautiful! i love it! |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI love the way how you put simple words but deep meanings. ^^ Great piece. |
| Anjel Kitty 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. I can feel what you are decribing. |
| A Sweet Escape 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseNot my favorite, but it was still incredible! ~Katt |
| temporality 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseNot a bad poem at all, if a bit trite. Then again, I probably think it's trite because I've never been in love and can't relate, so don't take that as an insult.' You could really go far with this, but it feels like you're only skimming the water, so to speak -- try plunging into the depths, if you will. Try imagery, description, different forms and words to show us what you see, think, feel, and know. Overall, not bad, and the first line is awesome. ~Antigone |