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Reviews For: A Lesson Learned

Estelin
2007-06-11
ch 1,
abusegood job keep up the good work and writing
Freedom Lasts Forever 2008
2007-05-05
ch 1,
abuseReally good story. I thought so that maybe it should have been a rabbithole instead of a pothole. They aren't really that dangerous. Anyways, really good story. Maybe you should have won the Horse-Canada contest. Keep on writing!

~Josee~
thecolourgrey
2007-05-04
ch 1,
abuseHorses are one of my favourite animals, so I juat have to read this when I saw the title. The story was okay but what I found unrealistic was the fact that a horse's leg could break just like that by stepping in a pothole? I'm not too sure on that one, but this was a pretty good effort.
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