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| Ladybugg13 2007-10-06 ch 1,  | abuseSo I was reading you're poems, and I glanced the description [why can a blank page mean next to anything?] And something inside of me sparked. I wrote a poem. I'm dedicating it to you. (im gonna post it in a second, its called everything, all at once.) It's funny to me, how different the poems are, coming from the same idea. -Bugg |
| Ethearia 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very intense. The wording is powerful, emphasised by the abruptness of each sentence which gives it a strong rhythm and decisivness. It seems to break off at the end of each line and jump right into the next, almost attacking it. And it completely encapsulates the inner whirwhild of passion of a true writer/poet when confornted with the tempting blankness of paper, so filled with endless possibilities. There's almost an impatient hunger or thirst to fill it up with yourself before someone else does. The posession of the paper becomes territorial! [at the risk of sounding like a nature documentary, I'll shut up] |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseTrue, writer's block can be a killer sometimes, but being the relaxed person I am, I just ignore it. This may be the explanation as to why I seriously need to update my story... Wait! I'm supposed to be critiquing this poem, right? Anyway, I could really feel your frustration here. And I like the meaning: a blank page can mean anything you want it to. |
| TheUnknownMarauder 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abuseLove. Write more. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseAre you sure you're 14? You strike me as a very mature, very advanced writer. So far, I've only read two pieces of yours, but both were excellently written and both added to my favorites list. I really love this piece, even though I don't believe in writer's block, I love this piece and what you've created it to be. Lovely job! |
| Stella-Polaris 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseTo submit. Everythings worth A try. I am absolutely rubbish because when I write one the world will come to an abrupt end. |
| deadrosepetals 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. i think it would be good enough to be turned in to school. |
| eva sprecher 2007-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethis kicks **! very deep, reminds be bout some of the stuff i write, except yours is better. |
| Frosted Midnight 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abusei like this. it touches on two of my 'favorite' subjects. insomnia and writers block. both are so verry joyful. |
| IggyBork 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseVery, very interesting. I especially liked the 'keeps secrets,' part, and how you synthesized paper with electronics in the last three stanzas. If your writer's block does this, then make sure you get it a lot. This was good. ;) |