This is a really good poem. I liked the as(s)inine words thing, the way you started a new idea with asinine made it feel like it was flowing as you thought it. also, stanza three made me smile.

interesting piece. i can't completely relate, but i can tell that it is very well written. good job

keep writing

I like this. It flows really well.

For about thirty-five seconds I was a bit confused by: as(s)–
-inine
but then I got it.
Quite clever, this was really well written.

Story of my freakin' life. I really like this a lot-it's got great flow and I like the as(s)-inine thing, but it might've been better
if you had done that throughout the poem. Whatever (what do I know XD?) I like this a lot.

I like your use of sound in this poem. I think the "as-inine" thing was a bit awkward - I know what you were going for, but I'm not quite sure it worked. Interesting idea nonetheless. Keep writing! :)