What a wonderful ending. You left it in a great spot, kind of left the reader wondering...

I just want to say thank you for writing this story. It's been an excellent read :)

I hope to see more from you soon!

~carm~

Lovely chapter. Emotional, powerful in a simple way.

~carm~

He kissed her? Uh-oh, I sense some trouble :) Great chapter. Update ASAP!

~carm~

Hmm, very complex relationships, huh? Good chapter! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen!

~carm~

An absolutely great chapter :) I loved that hug part at the end. Very nicely done. Not too over-the-top, you know? Update as soon as you can!

~carm~

Nice job. The style you use is so simple, and yet you are telling the story very well. Keep up the good work.

Another fantastic chapter :) I liked it a lot. The ending was excellent. Hehe. Can't wait for more!

~carm~

Ack, I love the way you narrate this story. It's different, unique, from the norm. Great chapter, by the way.

"Lies, after lies, continue to spew from that mouth of his. There was no trust in his eyes, and certainly no answers."

--That part was very nice, poetic almost.

Good job, and I can't wait for more!

~carm~

now you have austen ... but u still love Tj's hairy nipples

I like this story already. You're writing is addicting, if writing can be so :) Oh, one thing: shouldn't 'epilogue' be 'prologue'? Epilogues are at the end of books, prologues at the beginning.

Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!

~carm~