That was very haunting and very beautiful.

Creative, very creative. I like the irony, how the angel of darkness is asked to light the way. Another good poem!

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I love this! It reminds me of a song that a band named Within Temptation sings. Great poem!

I haven't read your work in forever! Awesome job! You've got mad wording skills :)

Anyhow, I like the overall mood of the piece.

I really like the wording, here, and how - for lack of a better word- oxymoronic it is. The first and last four lines are my favourite.

Nice! Cool flow and style, especially with the last lines: "Will you lighten the way / Through the darkness for me" Keep up the good work! :)

I can relate to this prose of yours!:)

Pretty! In the morbid way, yay morbid!