i liked it, it was really pretty, good job

evanescence123

Wow nice nice I love your repeatition "Scattered were the pieces. The pieces of my heart…" A short poem like this is really hard to write, and compacting sucha a strong image inside this small poem is even a greater accomplishment. Good job！ looking forward to see more.

Nice. I like the repitition.

Tragic but nice. Simple but strong. It's beautiful :)