Kind of Phantom of the Opera-ish.

Um, that line, "Immorality if you love me"-do you mean "immortality" instead?

Interesting. Reminds me of when my friend asked me why death seemed so pretty-that is mostly what struck a chord with me. Death has a quiet, twisted sort of pretty I can at once admire and despise in the same thought.

"Your pain is my sin ". *chuckles darkly* good line. I like it. That is mostly what made me think of Phantom, especially when taken with the knife imagery at the end.

Vale, et bonam scripturam.

(forgive me if the Latin is wrong)

Presence

Nice It's like a poem of overflowing emotions, gj. Is that guy u in the poem?

beautifully done